This book has a lot of positive reviews, so don't just go by my opinion. You're burning me up, taking everything I've got and turning it into a raging inferno.

Not to mention the cheesy dialogue during the sex scenes. It was to the point where I started skimming when I saw a sex scene coming up. And each sexual encounter was THE BEST EVER with the BEST ORGASM EVER. Literally over a dozen sex scenes, possibly more. This book needs an editor with a firm hand.ĥ) The sex: There was SO. I'm not a grammar buff, but I know when a sentence is uncomfortable to read. This book shows a basic lack of knowledge of comma usage, when to use a semicolon/colon, and who/whom-type errors. Killian hissed slightly, that wouldn't do the laptop any good. It was irritating how Max was such a two-dimensional character.Ĥ) The editing: There is no way that this book was professionally edited. He was the ultimate 'bad guy,' to the point where I was hoping the secretary or something was the mastermind, just to spice things up. Crazy.ģ) A villain character: The character of Max was so one-sided, so cartoonish, that it was laughable.

To top it off, Killian and Zach barely hid their relationship, going clubbing and touching hands at work, while they were trying to pretend like there was nothing going on. Having sex at work all the time, having a relationship with co-workers (not in a company with investors, no way), and acting like a baby was just part of what Killian did that irritated me. To top it off, Killian, as the head of the corporation was also utterly ridiculous. That plot point just rang so completely false. It was annoying to read, and touched upon a few HUGE pet peeves of mine.Ģ) A plot that is utterly implausible: There is just simply no way that an auditing company would send a 21 year old (who graduated college and got work experience as a baby, apparently) to work on a huge account with a major corporation BY HIMSELF. They are utterly devoted to one another and are CRAZY reckless with their bodies/health without knowing each other for more than a week. However, in this book the two men are in lust within seconds, have a 'deep connection' within minutes, and are in love within days. Do you like your romance with proper buildup? Lots of sexual tension and then a gradual falling in love over a long period of time and many shared experiences? I certainly do. Where do I even begin?!? If your reading tastes are the same as mine, you will struggle greatly with this one.ġ) Insta-love: Ah yes, my arch nemesis insta-love. This was most certainly NOT the book for me.

I struggled for DAYS to get through this book, which read like a checklist of what I don't like to read in M/M.

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